Your music choice goes very well with your imagery because it is both dark and quorky at the same time. The cuts you make to other scenery like the warehouse (40 sec.) and the surveillance camera (1 min. 20 sec.) feel like jump cuts to me though. They need something else to tie them together with the narrative you are creating with the boy in the tub and the girl in the bed. However, 1 minute and 7 seconds in, the cut to the train tracks seem like an appropriate cut to different kind of scenery. When I see it following the shot of the girl tossing and turning in bed, I make a connection between her and the train tracks. It makes me believe that she is dreaming about them or in some way they are significant to her character. I really enjoy this video. I think you did a great job and it could be something you go back to and add more shots to.
Your music choice goes very well with your imagery because it is both dark and quorky at the same time. The cuts you make to other scenery like the warehouse (40 sec.) and the surveillance camera (1 min. 20 sec.) feel like jump cuts to me though. They need something else to tie them together with the narrative you are creating with the boy in the tub and the girl in the bed. However, 1 minute and 7 seconds in, the cut to the train tracks seem like an appropriate cut to different kind of scenery. When I see it following the shot of the girl tossing and turning in bed, I make a connection between her and the train tracks. It makes me believe that she is dreaming about them or in some way they are significant to her character. I really enjoy this video. I think you did a great job and it could be something you go back to and add more shots to.
ReplyDeleteThat little boy is too young to be smoking! And how did you spin like that were you sitting on a record!
ReplyDeleteNah but for really though that was kinda creepy.
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